Monday, April 25, 2011

My favorite super hero

Hi friends!
Today I am going to talk you  about Iron man!, my favorite super hero.

This invincible super hero  that has a red and golden armor and he protects  the world correcting injustices ,  is a man  named Tony Stark. He is  a billionaire playboy, industrialist and ingenious engineer. Stark convert him in super hero when he suffers a severe heart injury during a kidnapping in which his captors attempt to force him to build a weapon of mass destruction. He instead creates a powered suit of armor to save his life and escape captivity. He later uses the suit to protect the world as Iron Man.
I like this super hero because he fight against the world’s injustices, like the poverty, the wars,  the terrorism and the  tyrannys. Iron man is an example for us because we must fight for the problematics that there is today in our country.
Iron man represents  to much people that have that put on “armor” for they hide your own identity because they think that for themselves cannot do big thing.
Greetings!

2 comments:

  1. Jenny! I like Iron man too! he's awesome haha
    Well, I don't like correcting some phrases but I have to u.u
    Please remember the famous "S" hahaha. You should've wanted to say: "Stark converts him...", "because he fights against..."
    and another thing, it's: "too much people"
    well, enough! hahah, kisses, see you and good luck with the study :C !

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  2. Hi Jenny. Thanks for your post.
    Some corrections: -It´s* a man named Tony stark,
    not just is a man...
    -represents too* much people.
    -Strak convert himself*

    That´s it, bye!

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